FlexRex: Fictional Blogger

I entered a screenwriting contest. The folks at NYC Midnight gave us a genre, subject, and seven days to write a script of up to 15 pages.

Title: Bardo
Genre: Horror
Subject: Prison

Tagline:
All the inhabitants of Huxley prison have vanished overnight. BARDO is the only clue to where they've gone and the hungry ghosts that have come to take their place.

The script is in PDF format. Check it our and let me know what you think.
Bardo script