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Monday July 04, 2005

haikus from a beach far, far away...

july noon -
red hen pecks,
pecks and runs.

summer heat -
rooster on a tin roof
calls and calls.

hot summer morning -
a cricket
comes to shade.

summer nightfall -
endless murmur
of the beach.

[turunc/2005]

(2005-07-04 02:05:12.0) Permalink Comments [2]

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Comments:

it doesnt make you feel relaxed and doesnt contain the imagery it should. -jenny

Posted by jenny oneil on May 28, 2006 at 09:34 PM EDT #

thanks for your blunt criticism. the first three are not intended to make you feel relaxed; i certainly was not. middle of july, mediterranean coast. it was blisteringly hot... obviously i will have to work on the imagery.

Posted by oz on May 29, 2006 at 10:01 AM EDT #

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